Magazine advert feedback (5th March)

This is the magazine advert Charlotte, Jodie and I presented:

We gained feedback on this:

Positive feedback:

Over all everyone gave us good feedback, everyone thought the look we went for was spot on and they liked the editing choices we made. The class liked the full length and liked that we were looking into the camera as it draws the viewer in.
They also liked the linked to our video by being in the forest.
The class also liked the font we used and the colour range.

Negative feedback:

There wasnt really a lot of bad feedback, but what we did get ewas very constructive.
Almost everyone agreed we should move the "missing you" up to our legs and position it more into the advert to make it clearer because otherwise it doesnt look as important. Also to change all the words to start with capital letters or all lower case as this was missed when editing. And finally to make the icons for the music providers smaller.

All of the feedback I would agree with and feel it helped us to get more of an understanding to hear this from other people.

Time to change it for second draft...